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Life is just a battle
It’s confusing, rough and loveless
You think you understand it
You think you have it under control
BANG!! The bullet flies and hits you
People who you thought cared stab you in the heart
When you thought that there was peace now there is war
You can’t get a grip on it anymore
People just don’t care

What is this life? Why did you do this to me??
All those things you said to me
What lies!! You are just like the rest of them.
Savages at heart. I didn’t harm you, nor offend you
I did so much, isn’t that what friends do?
Instead you through me away, without saying a word
©2006-2009 ~jonofox
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It doesn't make huge sense I guess to the reader. It was a few thoughts that have been swimming around my head for to long and I just needed to let a few out. I could of kept writting about this but chose to hold back.

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I understand this poem completely. Especially because the same feelings often dwell in my mind.

Maybe you and I should go and punch a wall together one day. Or chuck massive rocks off cliffs and watch 'em destroy trees.

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March 15, 2006
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